Jameson, The poses are solid. I like that you're getting the entire figure framed. The shading is a little too timid, though. Dive into this and use it to block out the figure. Because you have dark contours and light shading, the shading looks incomplete. Build it up together !
Continue to incorporate the furniture and the surroundings of your subjects. There are varying levels of success here. Keep at it.
I think your foreshortening has gotten a little better with these. Like the way you exaggerated.
ReplyDeleteJameson,
ReplyDeleteThe poses are solid. I like that you're getting the entire figure framed. The shading is a little too timid, though. Dive into this and use it to block out the figure. Because you have dark contours and light shading, the shading looks incomplete. Build it up together !
Continue to incorporate the furniture and the surroundings of your subjects. There are varying levels of success here. Keep at it.