Jameson, I like that you're trying to capture the individuality of the dancer (in details like the clothes and hair). I would suggest you not be so determined to draw such a specific contour of the figure, or shade in articles of clothing. Your looser underdrawings should flow seemlessly into any final decisions about contour lines, which these possess in part. Also, don't leave out the extremities (hands, feet), as these will accentuate the gestural line - even if you basically indicate them (thumb and finger forms).
I like the contours, but the positioning of the torso and hips is a bit off. The top left one seems flattened at the shoulders and buttocks, and the right leg is connected strangely on the bottom one.
Jameson,
ReplyDeleteI like that you're trying to capture the individuality of the dancer (in details like the clothes and hair). I would suggest you not be so determined to draw such a specific contour of the figure, or shade in articles of clothing. Your looser underdrawings should flow seemlessly into any final decisions about contour lines, which these possess in part. Also, don't leave out the extremities (hands, feet), as these will accentuate the gestural line - even if you basically indicate them (thumb and finger forms).
The variety in your poses is really neat!
ReplyDeleteI like the contours, but the positioning of the torso and hips is a bit off. The top left one seems flattened at the shoulders and buttocks, and the right leg is connected strangely on the bottom one.
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