I like the melty stylization you've got going here, and will assume it was intentional. My favorite is the guy on the computer in the middle one, the way you pushed him in space. Cool stuff!
Jameson, This is some of the best work you've posted, thus far. The last page is your strongest. With a pencil, don't allow the shading to control color so much as value. Also keep the line direction consistent to the form. With hands, block them out as lightly drawn primitives before concerning yourself with the specific fingers. Look at the last figure on the right -there is a dark line around his left hand's fingers, so the eye goes there. Why ? The thumb is a more pressure - focused control point. Make conscious decisions where you place your dark lines - you are leading the eye through the gesture.
I like the melty stylization you've got going here, and will assume it was intentional. My favorite is the guy on the computer in the middle one, the way you pushed him in space. Cool stuff!
ReplyDeleteI like that you drew the facial features on the people. It definitely gives the sketches more character.
ReplyDeleteJameson,
ReplyDeleteThis is some of the best work you've posted, thus far. The last page is your strongest. With a pencil, don't allow the shading to control color so much as value. Also keep the line direction consistent to the form.
With hands, block them out as lightly drawn primitives before concerning yourself with the specific fingers.
Look at the last figure on the right -there is a dark line around his left hand's fingers, so the eye goes there. Why ? The thumb is a more pressure - focused control point. Make conscious decisions where you place your dark lines - you are leading the eye through the gesture.