Pretty good work - good variety in posed and points of view. Again - watch your shading for clothing. In the top page, I think you're trying more things to challenge yourself. The seated couple is a nice combination of line variety and shape establishing depth as well as focus. Lighten up your final contour with clothing around the creases in elbows, waists, etc. That harsh line in an area that calls for a lighter touch draws our eye to it unnecessarily.
Pretty good work - good variety in posed and points of view. Again - watch your shading for clothing. In the top page, I think you're trying more things to challenge yourself. The seated couple is a nice combination of line variety and shape establishing depth as well as focus.
ReplyDeleteLighten up your final contour with clothing around the creases in elbows, waists, etc. That harsh line in an area that calls for a lighter touch draws our eye to it unnecessarily.