Jameson, Good variety of poses, subjects and points of view. Loosen your line up more - your contours are deliberate, yet there are still unfinished parts of the drawing (hands, feet). If you try varying the line and using a darker line in the points of tension or shadow - or to articulate limbs and objects closer to the viewer - I think it will result in a stronger drawing, overall.
Jameson,
ReplyDeleteGood variety of poses, subjects and points of view.
Loosen your line up more - your contours are deliberate, yet there are still unfinished parts of the drawing (hands, feet).
If you try varying the line and using a darker line in the points of tension or shadow - or to articulate limbs and objects closer to the viewer - I think it will result in a stronger drawing, overall.